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Blood red sun peeks through silhouetted pines Lavender frosts the eastern sky Crepe Myrtle blossoms line the drive Time in the hour glass marches by The summer sun has changed to orange As it rises higher still The gray wolf's eye sky looks innocent As it coats each and every hill The roosters' voices fall flat in the hollow The air hangs heavy today Song birds add their dimension As tunes begin to play Bright yellow-orange sun is higher It shines over the tops of trees What will this day offer Will its plot be sure to please

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 11:30:00 PM
WOW!! Please teach me how to jot like that! Love this one and now adding this beauty to my fav list. A7
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Date: 7/28/2015 5:50:00 PM
Your write swims smoothly in the heart of the readers, this precious write is intriguing. Excellent.........A.M.
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:10:00 AM
Sara, I love the imagery and again I don't need the picture, your poetry brings me there!~Olive Eloisa.. =)
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:10:00 PM
Just as poetry should be.
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Date: 7/26/2015 1:51:00 PM
- I hope your day will be as beautiful as your poem - Your nature poems is always a pleasure to read, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2015 1:20:00 PM
The imagery gave me a shiver down my spine Sara - simply breathtaking!:-) hugs jan xx7
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