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Just God and Me

I walked into the mountain high That stretched before me in the sky A magnificent cathedral of towering stone That reminded me I was completely alone What a palatial place for God to abide But, as in a trance He was there by my side I was comfortable then without any fear Knowing in my head my Savior was near But strangely, in my reverie A soothing voice then spoke to me Hello my son it gently said I'm really here not just in your head I wanted a moment alone with just you To tell you my love for you is true I wanted to tell you I hear you each day When you bow your head and reverently pray I do bless your loved ones I forgive all your sins And will never forsake you As long as you ask me in I enjoy all our walks And the talks we have had What brings you up here? Are you lonesome or sad? I'm neither my Lord, I spoke back to him Just looking for you to talk once again I'm feeling so happy my soul is just great Just searching for you so I could relate I'm happy I found you I thought you'd be here When I talk to you my head is so clear My life is complete; it's a wondrous thing When I talk to you, God, my heart could just sing I appreciate your talking and listening to me I need reassurance of your love don't you see It's so nice to hear you as we walk through this day Thank you dear Lord, for blessing my way!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2017 2:40:00 PM
Hi George, I loved the tone of this piece. I thought of "seek and you shall find " instantly. I believe God wants an intimate relationship with all of his children. You conveyed that point very well in this piece:-) Alexis PS, I am enjoying reading you today!
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:40:00 PM
George, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:11:00 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:54:00 PM
Love it! Def a 7! Be blessed
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