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Just Fingertips Apart

Each step I take along the way is more than I can endure and every curve in the lonesome road becomes a detour back to you because movin' on is somethin' I just can't do, not if movin' on means no longer will I be with you I can't explain what I hear when you don't say a thing But my heart dances to every word of the songs you sing I feel an ache so bittersweet when with a ragged breath I whisper and you're not here. Juliet dies another death I can't rewrite history, but if I could I'd steal time from stars All I can do is pencil in, "I loved you" on pages of memoirs When dying embers of us become ash without a spark I'll be lost without love in my life, wandering in the dark Emptiness is a painful emotion no dictionary can explain A chorus of 'What could've beens' I'll echo in sad refrain. But what can I possibly say to console my broken heart when it realizes that we're no longer just fingertips apart?

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/28/2023 9:26:00 PM

wo how wonderful the poem is; just great; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POTD

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/31/2023 1:51:00 PM

Thank you so very much for liking this one, Mahtab.

John Watt

Date: 3/27/2023 6:46:00 PM

Jenna, you certainly have the talent to write such a poem as a work of fiction, but I believe this one bubbles up from the deep waters of real anguish and emptiness. The genuine nature of your words is what gives them such gravitas and makes them so powerful and moving. My favorite lines are the first two of stanza three... "if I could I'd steal time from stars" is such an original and heart-tugging phrase, as is "pencil in 'I loved you' on pages of memoirs". I also loved the "Juliet dies another death" line, along with "just fingertips apart". Also, the picture you chose sets an apt tone of "wandering in the dark". Amazing writing, I'm glad to see you get healthy exposure to this from your POTD. Admiringly ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/27/2023 7:15:00 PM

Hi John and after reading your wonderful review, and many others, I'm very overwhelmed by the way this one has been received. I usually write and edit several times, but after one pass I didn't see a single word I wanted to change. That's a rarity for me. I always enjoy comments in which a reader tells me what he enjoyed the most, and you always do that. My favorite in this one was the Juliet line. I'm very fond of the title, too, and admit they were not my words, yet too perfect not to use. You are always gracious with your remarks...very much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2023 4:53:00 AM

Those poignant final two lines, leave us with an indelible image! Congratulations on POTD!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/27/2023 7:16:00 AM

Dear Kim, I've been in awe of the comments this poem has drawn, and those that state specifically what was liked. This poem means more to me than any potd or prize could ever offer, so I sincerely thank you for letting me know how much you like it.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2023 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Love your line, "I can't rewrite history, but if I could I'd steal time from stars." Have a Blessed Day/Week writing away...............

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/27/2023 1:02:00 AM

Hi Paula. Thank you so much for visiting this poem. I always like seeing you.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/25/2023 11:45:00 PM

Deeply touching poem, Jenna. Well deserved POTD! The mind has miraculous powers. It can create pain or joy, it is up to each of us to define the experiences we have them remain as memories as moments in time or for eternity. Peace be with you, Bill

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/26/2023 2:10:00 AM

Good morning and thank you, Bill. I wish our minds were capable of healing our hearts. Wracking up memories in the "heartache" column leaves much to be desired.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/25/2023 4:45:00 PM

WOW!! Jena, absolutely beautiful poem, and a big congrats on potd. :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 6:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Fin.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/25/2023 2:14:00 PM

So sad, yet this is so nice Jenna, fingertips apart is a lovely expression of being closely in love. I hope you are in love and this write is fictional… Belle

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 2:21:00 PM

You are such a caring lady, Belle. Always concerned about the wellbeing of other poets. Fingertips do not have to touch each other physically to find a way to express their feelings. I truly appreciate your thoughts.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2023 1:34:00 PM

- Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Jenna - Without love... life is empty - hugs

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 2:13:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I agree with you. Feeling empty is far worse than feeling all alone. Thanks for coming over to leave your comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/25/2023 11:46:00 AM

Jenna, emotion runs so deep throughout your heartfelt lines, that I can really feel them! No wonder this is POTD! Congratulations and enjoy xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 12:57:00 PM

Hi Mike. Because of the nature of your romantic poetry, I knew you'd feel the sorrow woven into these lines. Thank you for reading me and leaving your thoughts.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/25/2023 10:43:00 AM

"Moving on" seems such a simple thing to do...and yet...A great piece for POTD, Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 12:54:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts, Jim. 'Moving on' are just 2 simple words, but when love is lost it becomes a tangle of frayed heartstrings.

Constance La France

Date: 3/25/2023 9:00:00 AM

Jenna, absolutely a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so sincerely for leaving your gracious comments for me, Constance.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/25/2023 8:36:00 AM

WoW! Jenna, You penned such a good poem on longing to be with someone and heartache. This poem is so worthy of the poem of the day. Congratulations on your honor. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:15:00 AM

Hi Alexis. I'm so glad to see you. We haven't connected here lately. Thanks for the congrats.

R J. Elless

Date: 3/25/2023 8:11:00 AM

Jena, Congratulations on Your POTD. It's beautiful. Shows great emotion and compassion. Have a Great Day.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much my kind-hearted friend.

Deb M

Date: 3/25/2023 7:49:00 AM

Perfect poem for POTD Jenna…..Congratulations you!! Debx

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:13:00 AM

Thanks for your congratulation comments, Deb.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/25/2023 7:26:00 AM

Beautiful emotions and magical expressions of love lost . I was taken away ! Congratulations on POTD dear Jenna . Susan :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:12:00 AM

I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thanks, Susan.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/25/2023 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations On being chosen POTD, Jenna: To steal time from the stars is a beautiful line. Best, SuZ

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:10:00 AM

Hi Suz and thanks so very much. I appreciate knowing the line you found most interesting.

Joseph May

Date: 3/25/2023 6:34:00 AM

If we could only "steal time from the stars", to mend broken hearts, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:10:00 AM

Many thanks for leaving me your thoughtful remarks, Joseph.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/25/2023 6:29:00 AM

Beautifully written, as usual Jenna. I find it romantic and a little erotic as well. Congratulations on POTD! :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:07:00 AM

Hi Linda. Both of those emotions are spilled. There's great need for that love to continue turning back, but the inevitability of it not lasting seers with a burn too deep to ever heal. Thank you for your sensitivity.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/25/2023 6:29:00 AM

We don’t dial those up from nowhere- sorry for your obvious pain and loss - a well-deserved POTD to be sure.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:08:00 AM

Sadly, this heartache is all too real. More painfilled than any unrequited love could ever be. Thank you, Jeff.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/25/2023 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Jenna. A poem about heartbreak, and "what could've beens'...bittersweet emotions! Loved the passionate line "Juliet dies another death". Best wishes, Dear Poet ~ Mala

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/25/2023 9:00:00 AM

Hi and thank you, Mala. That line brought me to tears, and I'm the one who wrote it! Thank you for appreciating my poem and for the congratulations.