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Just Down the Road

Out there I had this wonderful great life But money did not erase the pains I had. Perhaps I wasn’t just on the right road Being young I barrel through life Making choices without thinking of Repercussions, so went down the road. Then kept growing, lucky and blessed Maybe somewhere along the right road. My destination was not hell so why I line Of course, it was heaven why line again. I have experienced a thin line between, Pain and pleasure, comedy and tragedy. I don’t know anything about music In my line you don’t have to know. I am at the end of the line in theatricals As theatres have died in my lifetime. I changed the road though very late Got into a line of deep personal interest I really enjoyed spending many hours Thinking, reading, writing, making Private word public, with muse awake That is what many poets would do it, I have kept my mind on bottom line.
+++++++ May 11, 2014 Form:Free Verse Fourth Place Win Contest: Just Down the Road

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Date: 5/23/2014 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win my friend!!
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:22:00 PM
Dr ....nice win...SKAT
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Date: 5/19/2014 9:06:00 AM
very perceptive, dr. ram.. great imagery.. big cheers on your win!.. huggs
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Date: 5/18/2014 8:09:00 PM
Poetry and other interests can keep our minds occupied, and away from trouble. Sometimes, it takes us a lifetime to learn that! A great write, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/17/2014 10:34:00 AM
Well I love this one. I knew I understood it in part but had to go back to it and read again to learn it and then love it! Some of the best things take a little work :)Well worth the second and third read...one I might come back to again just to be with it Ing PS I edited the poem I wrote for your contest. It is still not genius but I hope it has improved
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Date: 5/13/2014 4:16:00 PM
interesting poem showing how we change and develop. Love the imagery. Best wishes Linda
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:09:00 AM
Thought pondering write dr. Ram ..:) GBU From Olive..:)
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:33:00 PM
interesting write, Dr Ram : )
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:17:00 PM
Ram, I like how your journey led you to the mind of a poet, I think, I am the same, I have also followed many paths, seems like thousands really to get to here,
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