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Just Down the Road

Just Down the Road It always seemed to be just down the road, just out of reach. It fed a longing, a need, to travel, if only on the clouds. So much seemed so far away then. That which was close we wished to be far away from. Strange how that works, that longing to explore the unknown, thinking that we know the known. I told them I was just going “down the road”, not knowing where or what lay in its path. A vagabond heading for another place, ”just down the road”, searching for another reason to believe that something awaited. I wonder would I be as full, or empty, if I had never gone “just down the road”? I sit in the same spot now, weary, wondering, my head once again in the clouds. Everything is somehow – differently - the same. The names, the faces, the weathered buildings, and the dream of “just down the road”. John G. Lawless 5/5/2014

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Date: 2/16/2015 1:16:00 AM
Hi John, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:15:00 PM
Nice to see this one on the winning list again, JOHN, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
such a deep write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 2/7/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan as always for you interest and input.
Date: 2/7/2015 2:49:00 PM
I recall this great poem from my "Just Down The Road" contest and I enjoyed seeing it once again, John. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/7/2015 7:43:00 PM
Kelly thanks for all the wonderful contest themes you have presented for our muse's interpretation. It's been fun.
Date: 5/23/2014 9:19:00 PM
Amazing win John....SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2014 7:45:00 AM
thanks, always nice to hear from you regarding the contests.
Date: 5/20/2014 1:05:00 AM
It's a nice take on the theme of the contest. Congrats on the win, John
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2014 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, as always, for reading and commenting on the poems.
Date: 5/19/2014 9:01:00 AM
really deep, john.. big cheers on your win!.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2014 7:47:00 AM
Nette, I had some fun with this one as it was a very interesting prompt. Congrats on your placement also
Date: 5/18/2014 7:43:00 PM
Your poem was very thought-provoking, and it leaves the reader with the question of, what if? A great write, John! Congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/24/2014 7:48:00 AM
Perhaps I leaned a little toward Mr Frost's "road less traveled" with this one. but then again "it made all the difference".
Date: 5/9/2014 12:28:00 PM
Very good, John...Also, "Hell's Empty" Quite thought provoking.
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Date: 5/24/2014 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for checking in. Always nice to hear good things and that a poem "provoked thought" is IMHO a great compliment.
Date: 5/6/2014 8:59:00 AM
This is so very good...Perfect ending. Hope it does well for you in the contest. BG
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Date: 5/24/2014 7:51:00 AM
Barbara, it made it into the contest winners circle. Thank you for your encouragement.
Date: 5/6/2014 5:58:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, enjoyed it, John
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