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Just Don'T Leave Without Me

Pardon my heavy pace, Heavy as I may seem. Indecisive as i maybe, I am working towards thee. To that far left corner I must move this piece of furniture. And this one to right corner No, Im throwing it out the aperture! That reaction was not proper. I need to repent instantly. This right doing, is not proper. Isn't there a manner much suiting? Heavy as I may seem, I am working towards you. Indecident I might seem, Leaving with you is my ambition. You are gentle. With David you were. You branded him your own. The man after your own heart. For furniture i care not. Neither for silver nor gold. I booked a seat in your boat. Just don't leave without me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/27/2014 9:41:00 PM
A captivating and moving read. Hope he waits for you and does not leave you behind. Well done my friend!
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Nontando Sibanda
Date: 7/13/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, He wont leave without anyone who longs to go with Him!
Date: 10/15/2014 6:01:00 PM
materials excellent piece of writing smooth beautifully flowing pen
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Nontando Sibanda
Date: 7/13/2015 2:58:00 PM
Much obliged to you Sir.

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