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Just Desserts

My boss was a sneak and a cheat. His wife was much nicer and sweet. She caught him with Susie, A flaunting it floozie And threw him right out in the street. . For Carolyn's contestWon no. 4

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Carolyn Devonshire's "Horrible Bosses" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/22/2011 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn,Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on your wonderful winning poem so amazing ..great title luv..enjoy..we are away for two weeks in Florida with grand babies having fun..

Tony Lane

Date: 8/21/2011 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!!! Tony

John Freeman

Date: 8/20/2011 8:25:00 PM

"A flaunting it floozie" my kind of line, Joyce... remember that when you write a limerick for me. Hilarious! You Go Girl! Agape, Moses

John Smith

Date: 8/20/2011 6:33:00 PM

Congratulations! Your limerick flaunts you. Delightful.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/20/2011 5:33:00 PM

well done in true limerick form Joyce. Congrats to you

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/20/2011 4:23:00 PM

Your bosses' punishment definately fit the crime. Congrats on this winning piece. Very fun write. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2011 4:12:00 PM

:) Let's just say this man got what he deserved, Joyce. Congratulations on your win. Check the blog I just posted on the home page and you'll find that a dozen people helped decide the rankings for this contest. Love, Carolyn