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"just Can'T Fight It"

Why try and fight this overwhelming feeling.. Its so crazy but so much worth the healing... I'm tossing and turning with thoughts of your touch... To lay next to you and show you how I love you so much.. I can write and write but some how the words seem wrong.. I can sit at the piano and play but its still not the right song.. My love just pours out with no control when your in my thoughts and sight.. Twisted and childlike are what I've become through this night.. Bending like a tree branch without a snap.. This flowing stream of love is on course with no map.. With no garden to play in or someone to say no.. We must succumb to this desire and let our bodies glow... Pay the piper tomorrow for today we shall enjoy.. This run through the fields like a girl and boy...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:11:00 AM
I love to write passionate poems... I too have a little inspiration for the romantic write... Good work my friend....:JP]
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Date: 6/3/2010 10:14:00 AM
Mr Romance? I love this one too ~rgds Wilma
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:02:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Michael. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:07:00 PM
Overwhelming feeling, worth healing. Nice expression. enjoyed it as always
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:03:00 PM
Yep, you're crazy in love alright. But remember, everything right will have its time, no need to rush, or you might stumble.:) Hope your dream comes true for you. Nice write. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:29:00 PM
Longing for the one we love can be all consuming. Words don't flow properly and the music just isn't in our hearts. This is deeply moving, Michael. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:29:00 PM
Very romantic write for that loved one in your life...Keep the romantic pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:27:00 PM
so innocent but so not the wanting i like it ... sarah x
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