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Just Breathe On 'Em

Eighty years old and still motoring along Not quite as spry but my breath is still strong Can fend off attackers A real firecracker Just breathe on 'em and they succumb before long © Jack Ellison 2016

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Date: 1/14/2016 11:52:00 AM
Oh My, Oh My! How did I get so far behind... At least John John is back so you probably didn't notice... with all the celebrating going on!... LOL... Me Too!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/15/2016 7:35:00 AM
It's not a law that you MUST review every one of my poems BUT I sure do appreciate it, dear Carol!!! Love, Jack xox
Date: 1/9/2016 7:45:00 PM
AND.....Do dat breath have spirits on it? Are we invited? When, Where...we'll all be there! Chug A Lug til next time.....
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/10/2016 7:18:00 AM
Y'all come, d'ya hear!!! I'm a-waiting... I'll greet you a big tight squeezy hug and a bunch of juicy wet smackers!!!! Love, Jack xoxox
Date: 1/9/2016 11:00:00 AM
Lol , great write as always, hugs / / :) dalia
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/10/2016 7:19:00 AM
Hello sweetness... hope you day is a happy one! Love ya, girl! xoxox

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