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Just Breathe

five days of ecstasy followed by seven days of anguish trying to catch his breath his ghosts, get there first and he crashes as reality sets in, sadness overwhelms memories scattered throughout his room serve as bittersweet comfort forcing a smile, while on the verge tears he begins to pick up the pieces left behind he cues the music songs not so familiar, but ring true to his ears classics for them in the making he can't help but listen and wonder if she can hear as his head hits the pillow he realizes, he can no longer smell her, on his sheets, or her comforting touch, underneath but he remembers her voice, telling him to breathe one day at a time a motto his father lives by now his life support a reason to push thru and wait for that one perfect day he can finally grasp forever in a not so distant future he just has to remember to breathe ©DamienMichaels2009 ©©

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Date: 12/23/2009 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Danien and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Damien! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:41:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:39:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 12:10:00 PM
One moment at a time, one breath in and one breath out ... smile ... all any of us have is the NOW and you've captured that beautifully, Damien. An excellent write to be selected as a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Damien. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:57:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Damien >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:02:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:32:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:34:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Damien. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:14:00 AM
he cues the music songs not so familiar, but ring true to his ears classics for them in the making he can't help but listen and wonder if she can hear -->@.@ this poem is INSANE!to my favs=)
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:40:00 AM
aww a powerful poem, it is kind of sad though, my sister had a premeture baby many years ago and they did not have much equipment back then and they had to put string round his little ankle and pull it to make him breathe if he forgot when he was asleep as he was so tiny, he did not survive, when we lose a loved one we can appear to be dead inside for a while, God bless you from diane
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