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Just Because I Said I Do

Just because I said " I Do" Doesn't mean I married your family and yes I love you, but do I have to critique every pair of shoes to see if they match what ever color cloth your wearing and how many times do I need to hear "does this make me look fat?" Just because I said " I Do" Doesn't mean I might forget to wipe my feet once in awhile before entering the house or forget to pick up an article of clothing It's not that I'm lazy, I'm just a man like all the rest..You remember "All you men are alike" Just because I said "I Do" Doesn't mean you should get mad because I didn't hear you screaming while battling an intruder during a football game Hey, it was a close game Just because I said "I Do" Doesn't mean I might forget to say "I love you" before leaving for work or leave the toilet seat up.. after all you said "all men are alike" Just because I said "I Do" Well, " I Do" so there I said it twice unlike all the rest of the men For the contest Just because I said I do Sponsored by Skat A

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Date: 2/21/2014 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Yes, we constantly say, "All men are the same," yet we have bet our hearts on your differences.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/21/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Sue for your kindness
Date: 2/21/2014 7:22:00 AM
Ahhh....greattttt entry..entertaing....congratulations on your top win...
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/21/2014 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Donna for kindness
Date: 2/21/2014 4:43:00 AM
Great write and congrats on the fine win, Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/21/2014 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
Date: 2/21/2014 3:22:00 AM
great entry and great win. Congrats.........
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/21/2014 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Archana for your kindness
Date: 2/20/2014 8:52:00 AM
Fabulous! I love the ending! Such a well-written piece from a man's point of view! Congratulations on your win! Well deserved!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/21/2014 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Sophia for your kindness
Date: 2/19/2014 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic, I had fun reading this one over and over... I posted a few fun pictures, on my latest blog. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=20799&PoetID=17922 Enjoy and stop by if you like. Love ~SKAT~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/20/2014 9:47:00 AM
thank you my friend for your kindness
Date: 2/19/2014 11:21:00 PM
We had fun reading this one back at home, between my husband and I this one was the best. But, then two others followed. Frederic, I mentioned a prize for the top #1. A Premium Membership. But, from past experience, some of the PM's my sisters or I awarded are not used. It is up to you to accept the first place win. If you wish to pass it to the next winner. I totally understand. SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/20/2014 2:21:00 PM
again, thank you for your kindness
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Skat A
Date: 2/20/2014 11:12:00 AM
I will notify the soup, :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/20/2014 8:30:00 AM
I accept, so what do I do now
Date: 1/19/2014 3:49:00 PM
lol, could not resist. looking in to see who wrote this entry. I laughed on every line. read the poem to the company around me. awesomeness. Skat
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/19/2014 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Skat for your kind reply and my wife thanks you for the question, since I might be sleeping on the couch for awhile...
Date: 1/19/2014 10:35:00 AM
hahaha, this was hilarious. Especially the part about her battling an intruder. Very tongue in cheek!!! If ONLY my complaints were half this trite. heehee!!! I think you will score well.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/19/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Andrea my poetic friend and yes it was tongue in cheek, actually I'm a lucky guy, my wife is one of those persons everybody loves, she calls it personality, me I think it kindness

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