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We all need silly Moments in life... Moments to cool off To not think To not worry Just to Be... Just to unwind... Just to let all problems go And feel free... Spread your wings And soar above all That have hold you down Above all That made you feel bad That made you feel less That made you feel sad Just turn your thoughts to light And become all that you can be Allow yourself to see how amazing and strong you are And how far you can go... Allow yourself to just breathe... To just feel... To just Be... **** October 10th, 2016 "I wrote this poem to my friend Darren White - Thanks for all your support, encouragement and for being an amazing friend - Love you"

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Date: 12/20/2016 5:07:00 PM
Inspiring poem... congrats on being featured.....
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/20/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Bernard! I was pleasantly surprised :)
Date: 11/30/2016 2:43:00 PM
What a lovely uplifting poem - so lovely to meet another friend of Darren's:-) hugs jan xx
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/30/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan! It's great to meet you too! **hugs** It's an honour to be a part of your family, sweetie -you're stuck with me, hun... told you so... hehehe ;) <3
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Darren White
Date: 11/30/2016 3:16:00 PM
The Darren family grows ; -)
Date: 11/29/2016 11:41:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Claudia. Welcome to PS...if you are a friend of Darren's you must a good heart just as he.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 5:05:00 PM
hahaha - guilty as charged! (like you!!!) ;)
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Darren White
Date: 11/29/2016 2:17:00 PM
Don't listen to her, she is biased incarnate ;)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Tim! For liking my poem and for your welcome! I agree with you, Darren is a wonderful person and the best friend ever(I'm totally unbiased saying it :D )
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Darren White
Date: 11/29/2016 11:52:00 AM
Awww, thanks Tim, you made me blush :)
Date: 11/29/2016 11:07:00 AM
Very uplifting and encouraging and so very true. I find those silly moments often and you should see the looks of those around me when I do. :) Really nice Claudia.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Chris... I always take a time for my silly Moments too - life is too harsh if we don't allow ourselves a break to breathe :) :*
Date: 11/29/2016 10:36:00 AM
Claudia, I'm so glad you found Soup! I just signed up a week ago myself. I loved this poem. You're right, we do need moments like that, to ground ourselves every once in a while. <3 :-)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 10:50:00 AM
I'm glad too Jason!!! I just signed 2 days ago :) Thanks for your words, I must confess that I was really nervous about posting my poems... specially in a place where there are so many great poets. <3 **smooches**
Date: 11/29/2016 10:03:00 AM
Awww Claudia, you posted it here. It's a beautiful poem, and I am honoured that you mentioned my name :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 10:51:00 AM
I am!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in, out, in, out - hahahaha :*
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Darren White
Date: 11/29/2016 10:15:00 AM
BREATHE <3 and hugs :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you!!!! I still can't believe I really posted it... And you're a huge part of the reason I didn't give up writing poems... not just that... Now I'm actually sharing them! :* :)
Date: 11/29/2016 10:00:00 AM
Such good words for all us anxious types!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 11/29/2016 10:13:00 AM
Thank You Sunlite!!!! that means a lot! Believe me I'm taking really deep breaths right now, after posting it... ;)

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