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Just An Ordinary Day

Just ordinary day Went to hard work.. not play None knew his life would end When to work he did attend Went to hard work..not play But today called away When work he did attend Not even his best best friend But today called away None knew his life would end Not even his best best friend Just ordinary day

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James Fraser

Date: 3/24/2010 2:19:00 PM

Sad poem Sara, nice tribute to the young man you told me about >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/18/2010 12:22:00 PM

Thank you for presenting us with your awesome poetry to read today Sara. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/18/2010 5:34:00 AM

Nice tribute to a sudden death on "an ordinary day". Keep your pen flowing and thak you for your comments...Gert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/18/2010 4:31:00 AM

Sara, This form is the perfect form for this poem. I love it and have enjoyed pantoum poems since the first time I saw it...one of your earlier poems. Thanks! Love, Your Friend, Dane Ann

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/17/2010 11:57:00 PM

soup mail.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/17/2010 11:24:00 PM

some deaths are sudden.it is very tragic.then there are those deaths that are known to come,also tragic.on Feburary 24,2010.a 13 yr old girl died after a softball game she played on her team because she had bad asthma.and almost every school i've gone too,there is someone dieng, whether a teacher or student.i remember this girl about 3 years ago in a choir class i had.her name was -NICOLE LEIGH MCMEANS.you could search her anywhere.she passed after an accident, motorcross racing.she was 12.

John Freeman

Date: 3/17/2010 7:25:00 PM

PS Sara, I tagged you to write a poem ending in : I'm a poet." Look At my latest poem. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 3/17/2010 6:05:00 PM

Awesome Pantoum but a sad day Sara. These things do happen. Thank the Agape, they are not written in stone. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/17/2010 12:52:00 PM

I'm so sorry to hear this is a true event, such heartbreak. Bless his family, and all those who knew and loved him during this sad time. Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/17/2010 12:45:00 PM

nice tribute to the young man. only 31 years old.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2010 12:28:00 PM

In a round about way this past week we have been touched by the death of a young man who went to work on an ordinary day and was hurt on the job and died several days later...We never know...Sara