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Just an hour

Just an hour would do
One hour spent between me and you
I could make that hour last, like a moment in time for two
A lifetime for me, a lifetime for you!

Oh what I could do? If given a brief moment with you...
Each raindrop would drop like dew, never reaching its potential
Just searching for me and you...
Oh be still and think, what I could do to you...

If we had an hour, just think of a thunderstorm
The rain running down upon us, chasing thru ev’ry door
Dampness and sweat running down my face
once you catch me, I’ll give no more chase

Pressing up against the flooded bricks
Tasting your neck as I squeeze your wrists
You bite  my lip as the sun comes out
Lets go inside and figure this ending out!

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Wow...very impressive write here!!!! I'm actually speechless on this one.!!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:57:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrea. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:04:00 PM
    ‡ Wow, Sooo Enchanting, Romantic, Sensual, Picturesque, Seductive, Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Andrea. We As Readers Ofttimes Cannot Seem To Avoid Or Help Ourselves From Stepping Inside Anothers Verse To Become Their Subject; To Make Its Moment Our Own ? Albeit At This Point Merely A Fantasy. But What A Beautiful One This Is. I Shall Favour This Passion Dipped Beautiful Verse. Ah Let The Heart Be Still. Sweet Kisses To You, Rachel *