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Just An Hour

Just an hour would do One hour spent between me and you I could make that hour last, like a moment in time for two A lifetime for me, a lifetime for you! Oh what I could do? If given a brief moment with you... Each raindrop would drop like dew, never reaching its potential Just searching for me and you... Oh be still and think, what I could do to you... If we had an hour, just think of a thunderstorm The rain running down upon us, chasing thru ev’ry door Dampness and sweat running down my face once you catch me, I’ll give no more chase Pressing up against the flooded bricks Tasting your neck as I squeeze your wrists You bite my lip as the sun comes out Lets go inside and figure this ending out!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/29/2012 7:52:00 PM
Wow...very impressive write here!!!! I'm actually speechless on this one.!!!
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:57:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Andrea. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2012 9:04:00 PM
‡ Wow, Sooo Enchanting, Romantic, Sensual, Picturesque, Seductive, Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Andrea. We As Readers Ofttimes Cannot Seem To Avoid Or Help Ourselves From Stepping Inside Anothers Verse To Become Their Subject; To Make Its Moment Our Own ? Albeit At This Point Merely A Fantasy. But What A Beautiful One This Is. I Shall Favour This Passion Dipped Beautiful Verse. Ah Let The Heart Be Still. Sweet Kisses To You, Rachel *
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