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Just a Woman

Just a Woman She stood in the cold, bitter salt spray masquerading as tears stinging her cheeks. North winds had come early, rough seas, maddened surf, no sight of sails in two weeks. She stood, leaning into the wind, just a woman. She stood in the warmth of spring sunshine hanging clothes on the sagging rope line, children using her as part of their game, dog barking at the approach of the mail truck. She stood, gazing into the empty mailbox, just a woman. She stood in the midst of dust dry fields watching a dream carried off on the arid winds nurtured the essence of their hope hefted the weight of fates harsh habits. She stood, hungry and tired, just a woman. She stood in the lush fields of happiness smiling on the future of her love, watching youth grow to man and womanhood move on toward their ever vague futures. She stood, teary eyed, waving goodbye, just a woman. She watched him slow in the achiness of age eyes dimming in the shadow of tomorrows, held his hand and walked the narrow corn rows rekindling the joy of youthful lovers. She stood, in loving’s dream, just a woman. John G. Lawless 5/30/2015 2019 Marathon Poetry Contest #4

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Date: 6/14/2015 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:)Alexis
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:49:00 PM
John, a lot of sad things here. From my perspective, time goes by very quickly. Even the happy times are a bit tinged. You have captured life very well.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/1/2015 6:36:00 AM
Duke, a mentor of mine once told me that "life is what is going to happen to you while you are making other plans". Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 5/31/2015 3:47:00 PM
This is so beautiful and lovely and wonderful, John! Thank you for singing the praises of being a woman from a man's point of view! I loved it! A 7 :)
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Date: 6/1/2015 6:35:00 AM
Laura, thank you for you the high mark and kind words. My niece once told me that she wanted to become a carpenter so I told her to by a hammer and get started...
Date: 5/31/2015 11:23:00 AM
This is lovely, John. I'm very moved by this piece. You capture all the beauty of a women during all the different phases of her life. Good luck in Justin's contest. This is Eileen, by the way. Yes, went for a different pen name. Thanks for visiting my...Get Her Drunk. :)
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Date: 6/1/2015 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I thought of using a pseudonym but then it was pointed out to me that many think that the name I now use is a pen name.

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