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Just a Small Poem For a Friend

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Little blue bird without a name It's you I heard I play your game High in that tree You sing a song And you want me To fly along The beach is near But stars are far A sky so clear And then we are Above the clouds The clear blue sea We sing out loud Just you and me *** May 30, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 6/27/2017 3:04:00 PM

Uplifting and easy to follow. Well done

Darren White
Date: 6/28/2017 5:35:00 AM

Thank you :)

Carol Deason

Date: 6/24/2017 7:59:00 PM

Very nice poem! Friendship is a beautiful gift and you convey it perfectly.

Darren White
Date: 6/25/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thank you Carol, I agree that friendship is important.

Phil Capitano

Date: 6/22/2017 8:13:00 AM

Big words in a small poem; its great to have such a friend. Nice one Darren.

Darren White
Date: 6/22/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Phil, I feel lucky. I love my friends. :)

Jeremy Smith

Date: 5/31/2017 10:16:00 PM

Your friend, is very lucky :)

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:36:00 AM

I am lucky that I have good friends here :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2017 9:12:00 PM

Small poem, huge heart!

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:36:00 AM

My heart has a lot of room, for many people

Carole Duet

Date: 5/31/2017 9:08:00 PM

So lovely, Darren. Bluebirds (even symbolic ones) are my favorite. They are so beautiful and rare. A FAV for me!

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:35:00 AM

wow, I love it, that fav :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/31/2017 7:05:00 PM

charming!

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:35:00 AM

Happy you like it, Ilene :)

White Wolf

Date: 5/31/2017 6:46:00 PM

What a wonderful first poem to wake up to! Stunning, Duir!

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:34:00 AM

Thanks Budgie :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2017 4:40:00 PM

absolutely delightful Darren - the formatting reminds me of geese in flight:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:33:00 AM

yeah, tried so simulate flight indeed HUGS

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 5/31/2017 4:12:00 PM

Eye fly with the blue bird

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:33:00 AM

Yep, thanks Eye :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/31/2017 4:09:00 PM

Top of The Evening Darren. How beautiful is this. Very. How poetic in formatting and presentation is this. Very. Your sentiments for your friend is lovely. Your friend is also blessed to have such a friend in you. Sorry I've been missing your work. Have a great night. Well done in its entirety. -- s m i l e --

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 5:04:00 AM

You're welcome my friend, and no need to be sorry about anything. :)