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Just a note When our dreams become our life Waking moments become haunting nightmares Existence fades as reality runs away By Arthur Vaso 2016 Inspired by the poem by Charmaine Chircop Just A Note When our dream becomes our life Waking moments would be only an existence of who We truly are. By Charmaine Chircop 2016

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Casarah Nance

Date: 11/17/2016 5:33:00 PM

both are brilliant.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/17/2016 8:14:00 PM

Those are words I can find absolutely no fault with!!! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2016 4:34:00 PM

Oh Arthur...Your Just A.Note is much more powerful than mine..I really love were.it lead you... Those haunting nightmares.can indeed be dark...A fave. Im honoured my little scribble inspired one of my fave. Poets on soup.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/17/2016 8:13:00 PM

You are such an inspiration! hugs! Look at comment above you!

Chris Green

Date: 11/7/2016 3:06:00 PM

Really nice Arthur. Charmaine is an inspiration to us all. You poem should make her smile.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/17/2016 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Chris, she sure is!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/7/2016 11:00:00 AM

I like your twist Arthur or is that twisted.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/17/2016 8:12:00 PM

Lemon twist!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/6/2016 7:05:00 PM

I was expecting to be fooled a second time. You might need to explain your perspective to me on this one. I personally love it when my dreams come true. Living dreams is a tremendous gift.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Richard, I love dreaming, I was more or less being the ying to the yan, about someone losing their mind.