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Just a note to the one I love He holds my heart in his kid gloved hand Many years we've shared me and my Eagle For now his head feathers are white and reagle I loved him for he chose me From all the rest our love came to be Now his once raven hair is white with age But honor he will carry to his grave He will be buried with his "Bible" his sword and shield No dishonor will he from life wield How he loved the rural life Cows, hogs, farming land no strife We've had our ups and downs Somehow we loved enough not to clown When it came to our relationship This was more important even in a hardship We worked on loving each other Tried to understand and share even if bother We learned, grew, and our hearts entwined Hearts grown together died if apart contract signed Thanks my love for these years Your only wife and friend

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Date: 11/12/2010 10:54:00 AM
Very loving and sweet tribute to your husband:)
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Date: 11/11/2010 7:12:00 AM
Yep! After the honeymoon, a relationship takes work. Congrats on your efforts. My wife and I are working on 60 years together this October. It has been work at times. Love, Dave
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:29:00 PM
Sweet devotion; may I thank you too. It is encouraging to read your comments. I pray you enjoy each other for many more years to come.
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:38:00 PM
sad and beautiful
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:40:00 PM
Sara, This is heartfelt and delightful to read..He deserves this wonderful tribute..and hope you wrote this for Linda's "One in a Million" Contest, because Your Love seems like he is. May God bless you both! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:42:00 AM
what a tribute - your husband is fortuante to have you as a wife/friend (ditto for you). Very well written, emotional, relaxing and lovingly sincere. You have a way with words, your heart drips out of your words which flow so passionately. thank you again for the experience of the read, chuck
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:31:00 PM
i really hope that this story is your real life song! such a great tribute, something i one day hope to have! great poem!
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:21:00 PM
Your love has endured the hardships and trying times, Sara. That's something special! There are people who only stay with you during good times. What you have is true love, dedication and a commitment that will last forever. God bless you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:17:00 PM
Sara .....nice depiction of emotions. I loved him for he chose me....yeah luv begins with faith, rest is modality. Thnx for taking time out and leaving nice comment on my work " Not just one in million, million virtues in one" Luv/best wishes....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:29:00 AM
nICE FEELINGS OF LOVE AND DEDICATION, SARA
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:20:00 AM
It is a Gem of a Poem. Your love and dedication for each other is very intense and full of understanding. Great write and a very cool one. And many thank for your kind comments on my Poem 'Festival of Light Deewali'. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.........Sara Kendrick
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:42:00 AM
You're one of the lucky ones to have found true love with friendship, Sara. Great tribute to your husband. I'm so happy for you both for finding each other.
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:41:00 AM
Well written poem of love and dedication to the one that makes your heart beat fast... luv Michael
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