Just a Night Cap

Bud heads drink the dew; an evening toast is sweet; their bedtime night cap.

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/24/2014 10:11:00 AM

Who had the night cap? That's what makes it precious. Love, daver

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:37:00 PM

Thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/23/2014 10:56:00 PM

Your haiku made me smile with the clever imagery your last line expressed! I loved this!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:38:00 PM

Wow, thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2014 7:58:00 PM

oh, now this is just DARLING!!!! love the word play.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:38:00 PM

I appreciate the reading and commenting.

Judy Konos

Date: 10/23/2014 6:36:00 PM

SWEET INDEED! Naturally I took it the wrong way. Such as the Budweiser Boys were raising a toast to the football game and that was indeed how they capped off the night....LOL...I like it both ways...and thanks to David Meade I NOW understand your meaning!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2014 6:43:00 PM

I'm glad, thanks for reading and commenting.

David Meade

Date: 10/23/2014 5:13:00 PM

As a gardener, I really enjoyed the imagery of the buds and dew -- makes me want to pour a glass of red wine and walk in my garden. Good capture of nature.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/23/2014 6:03:00 PM

Grab that moment while you still can...winter is coming. Thanks