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Just a Little Peck

Always better to live in shadows Even though shadows can not be hidden Only living in darkness we see the light of promise and solstice We comprise our soul and self belief with love that must shine without doubt Spiraling angel dust sparkling magic Fallen in mystic theology the man must lay his sword from grace With warm purity in his heart chasing away the demons as they only lay for you A thousand songs of midnight chimes gently they toll under the moon's grace Where the sparkles shine bright for many's a year I remember holding your body tight Where we will dance cheek to cheek forever embraced deep down beautiful always right To love and follow one's heart and desires is to take an angel's hand kissing her fingertips With the softest touch one touch is never enough....... Co written by David Bucknell and Liam Mc Daid.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/29/2015 6:03:00 AM
wow..what a beautiful write...love this..rating..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 1:32:00 PM
a blessing your comment thank you smiles
Date: 12/3/2015 11:20:00 AM
A great band of two poets adorned a beautiful picture of devotion to pleasure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 12/1/2015 5:01:00 AM
Reading this poem is a great pleasure. Rich in images. Some poetic lines one would like to save under memorable quotes.
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Date: 11/30/2015 3:26:00 PM
Courteous and smooth with images I see.
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Date: 11/30/2015 10:19:00 AM
Great Work!
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Date: 11/30/2015 4:08:00 AM
I LOVE THIS ROMANTIC POEM ,KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK STAY BLESSED KOENA THE POET
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:42:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, romantic, pure images. "Spiraling angel dust sparkling magic" - I love it! Lovely, both of you.
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Date: 11/29/2015 12:54:00 PM
lovely,every word flows :) awesome
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:00:00 AM
What a great Colaboration! Congratulations on your lifetime Premium membership.
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:41:00 AM
Dear Liam and david, I congratulate you both on this wonderful uplifting piece. It is inspiring with awe ...it soaks slowly but deeply like the Autumnal rain ...i like the move between the "We" the "I" the "You," ending with the "She" ....and there it ends without ending...the end is the starting point. I enjoyed your "Just a Little Peck" and rate it at 7! Thank you for inviting me Ase
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:57:00 PM
- Beautiful and romantic, David & Liam - "To love and follow one's heart and desires is to take an angel's hand kissing her fingertips" ........ favorite lines :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend, Liam (and David) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:54:00 PM
Hi Liam n' David! This is a very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam, and this time in collaboration with your friend David.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome! I truly enjoyed it!A true golden gem! Very enchanting!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it! This is so very beautiful and sweet.Just wonderful!Superb imagery!Very enchanting!Outstanding collaboration!Just excellent!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav!Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers Liam!Keep your Faith!Keep your love hopes n' dreams always too:))Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:41:00 PM
Just Beautiful!!!
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