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Just a Glimpse of You

Is there a reason to forget those bright eyes of yours, that once melted my frozen heart? You were my dream and I was your hope until hideous fate peeked in in the disguise of irresistible choice and grabbed you away from me - forever leaving me alone groping in the dark - like a fragile paperboat drifting and drowning in strong currents of stream In the pitch dark of my life when flashes of memories of our own secret space of those delicate strolls along the shores holding hand in hand - our footprints in sand your inviting smiles and deep insights ignite my dazed spirit: My weary soul just prays for a chance to meet you again... My tender mind just craves to feel your magical aura again... My anxious eyes just yearn to meet those sparkling eyes again... Just to catch a glimpse of you... to soothe my pangs of separation Just a glimpse of you... My love... Date:04/25/2021 Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Ache - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/13/2021 10:15:00 AM
Real Ache.
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Date: 4/28/2021 8:35:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Free Verse poem on the ache of lost love, well done, love _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/28/2021 10:41:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much for another wonderful contest... I was happy to enter this contest.. Have a blessed lovely day dear... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 4/27/2021 2:58:00 PM
Yayyy, Congrats on the win!!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/28/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Andrea... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/26/2021 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations, Ani. This is a beautiful poem expressing love and pain of separation. Your stunning images portray the heartbreak and the hope of meeting love again! Powerful write! Love ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Mala.. Just imagined and wrote this.. what it would be to feel the pain of separation... Have a lovely day dear... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/26/2021 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on you great contest win Anitha. Blessings and hugs
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Lasaad. Much appreciate your visit and comment... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/26/2021 2:48:00 PM
Great imagery Anitha, fine penning indeed. Blessings,Gordon
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon for the visit and comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/25/2021 4:49:00 PM
O, the agony and the ache, Ani. Very powerful penning here. I really reel all your pain and yearning. Great write, Gershon
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Gershon. Much appreciate your visit and comment.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/25/2021 10:36:00 AM
So beautiful and sad and longing and full of sweet love and intention of all beautiful things for the future. I am sorry for your loss dear Ani. "I was your hope until hideous fate peeked in in the disguise of irresistible choice" Just wonderful. All the best, Susan :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:05:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Susan.. This is a fiction my dear friend... Have a blessed day... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/25/2021 2:02:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful poem. Loved the metaphor of the paper boat. Lost love seem to attract poets and you did a fine job. Best for a win.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor.. am happy you liked the metaphor.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 4/24/2021 4:10:00 PM
wow, Anitha. you are so amazing. Did you learn English since birth? I say this because I know you are from India, but not many from another land have such a great grasp of the non-native language as you do. I just know Constance will love this. It's "her kind of poetry" methinks!! I have less than half an hour to catch up here. OH my, I don't think it can happen!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 4/27/2021 2:03:00 AM
Andrea thank you so much for such a sweet comment... Hugs.. ~ Ani

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