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Just a Ghost

i walk this earth,just a ghost no family,no friends,just a ghost no home,no car,just a ghost no love,only a broken heart,just a ghost on my knees,praying to god,send me something to let me know i do exist,just one person to touch my life,instead of being just a ghost he answered me,sending a true heart to love me just for me a woman who knows i have nothing,and loves me unconditionally someone who lifts me up ,everytime i get down gives me confidence and faith,constantly tells me not to frown i thank god everynight now,for me no longer,,,,,being a ghost

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Date: 5/30/2010 10:03:00 PM
Thankyou(: youres is very beutiful as well(:
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:28:00 PM
I like the refrain in this poem. Give thanks and praise as always. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:14:00 PM
Nice popem(: i liked it it felt really deep to me. Care to read mine?
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:23:00 AM
well writen i love this poem good luck and welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 5/28/2010 7:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup David. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2010 9:41:00 PM
I dont believe in ghosts..Im certain a ghost didnt write this awesome piece. well done.BG
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:12:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family.. enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 4:22:00 PM
That's right no longer a ghost...a ghost couldn't write this wonderful poem.
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Date: 5/27/2010 4:20:00 PM
Awesome
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