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Just a Flicker

how many fires can be lit by a single flame? with so many desires not to find out would be a shame we only need a little heat from the spark of forbidden passion doesn't accept defeat sensuality can't remain hidden we can keep our fires blazing in the realm of sweet surrender true love can be amazing and our romance can endure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/3/2016 9:38:00 AM
It went strong for me, a bam, bam, bam verse until I got to the last line. I must pronounce 'endure' differently than you and the commenters below me / or maybe surrender? Aside from that, this was a rollicking poetic ride, fast rocking flow with all that makes such glow. Really sweet and intense ... CayCay
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:37:00 AM
I love the whole work but your rhymes really stand out to me ... wonderful use of words, plus it's saucy! Nicely done, Dave
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:21:00 PM
Wow Christy, wow. This one really touched me tonight. Yes it can if we keep fanning the flames with affection and love. This poem may be my favorite by you. This poem is wonderfully written and is pretty close to perfect.
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Date: 11/30/2016 8:47:00 PM
Love the romantic desire that emanates from your fine poem, Christy! Great job :)
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