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Just a Dream

ONCE IN A BLUE MOON'S VENTURE I UNDERTOOK A JOURNEY TO SEEK THAT WHICH I TREASURE THERE HE WAS AND I WOULDN'T LET MY HEART PONDER FILLED WITH CRYSTALLINE DELIGHT, MY HEART STARTED TO FLATTER HIS FACE RECTANGULAR YET SCULPTED, UNLINED AND DELICATE HIS EYES BROWN YET VIVID AND PALE LIKE A LASER BEAM HIS SMILE RADIANT AND GENUINE MAKING HIS FACE SPARKLE HIS BODY ATHLETIC AND REFINED LIKE GOTHIC ART HE FIXED HIS EYES ON ME RELENTLESSY LIKE A TARANTULA STARRING AT ME WITH A LURING GAZE A THOUSAND DIFFERENT SENSATIONS CAME WAS IT BECAUSE OF THE BREEZE OF THE SERENE NIGHT OR THE TEQUILA? "I AM...", HE SAID IN A SOFT SLOW VOICE SO ALLURING THE SOOTHING SOUND OF HIS VOICE SO MELODIOUS AND ENCHANTING HE DREW CLOSE TO ME CAREFULLY REACHING FOR MY HAND IN THAT MOMENT OUR HEARTS BLEND BUT WHY IS THERE A CACOPHONY IN MY HEAD? AND A PITCHER OF ICE WATER ON MY BED? ITS MAMA WAKING ME UP, I COULD HEAR IT WITH THE SCREAM THEN I REALIZED, IT WAS JUST A DREAM

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Date: 4/17/2016 8:23:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Buhlebenkosi. :)
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Date: 4/17/2016 5:19:00 AM
Shine, shine lady. Nice write
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Date: 4/11/2016 10:57:00 AM
Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Buhlebenkosi Moyo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:15:00 AM
thank you
Date: 4/11/2016 5:44:00 AM
Buhlebenkosi Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Buhlebenkosi Moyo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:15:00 AM
thank you

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