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Just a Dream

I'm waching the clock its screaming tick tock 3 o'clock with homework not done im already gone out of this world with one ood friend she helps me out she calls me chout once again im dreaming in bed but ill alawys have that dream in my head i wake up to see my mom meanly glaring as i start blankly staring and staring as i keep staring wondering whats happening i got to school to see my teacher glaring i open my eyes gust anough to see my friend is failing once again its just a dream thank the lord now im really awake eating my stake doing my work watching my mom weirdly lurk i ask her why she doesnt reply oh well time for school but wait its saturday so i go back to sleep i awake and start to weep i start to weep beause i cant get back to sleep

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Date: 2/4/2016 11:32:00 PM
Hi Kaycee,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:10:00 PM
Kaycee, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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