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Just Thoughts

Just Thoughts The Attic Looking in the attic through the pages of an old picture album - I found the historic life of me. Morning Mist In a morning mist, an illusion came to me, that you were there, waiting for me. Angels As the stars light up the sky at night, the angels dance in their glowing light. Deep Deep the ocean. Deep is the sea. Deep is the love that I have for Thee... 06/10/2014 By Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: I was just playing with words

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/25/2014 7:14:00 PM

This to me Is poetry, Lucilla

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/25/2014 10:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Jerry. Glad you like it.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/21/2014 3:51:00 PM

Your words are always creative and set my mind to do the same. Miss you and all the others. Love, Lizzie

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/21/2014 4:03:00 PM

Lizzie; It is nice to see you. I am sorry too. I have not been around too much. I have been very sick. I have been in the hospital 4 times this year. I just got out yesterday. I will come back.

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera

Date: 6/18/2014 2:24:00 PM

i can see you are relaxing your mind by the playing with words of thing happening around your imagination. NICE POEM!

Carl Fraser

Date: 6/16/2014 1:01:00 PM

This is a great expression of how the mind jumps from one thing to the next and you display it so well with your words Lucilla, blessings Carl

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/16/2014 10:13:00 PM

Thank you Carl for your nice comment.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/12/2014 10:49:00 PM

This is a very unique write of beautiful random flowing thoughts.... I have a notebook that I keep my inspirations in, and it looks very much like this.... I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, Lucilla! Nice work!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/13/2014 2:00:00 AM

Thank you Kelly, glad you like them.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/11/2014 11:04:00 AM

wow i just love these, you have them as light poetry, oh the feeling they profess, are so powerfull

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/11/2014 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Harry. I'm glad that you stopped by.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/10/2014 7:12:00 PM

you fill me up with these vignettes of life and love... lovely, lucy!. huggs and prayers.. how are you?

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/10/2014 7:22:00 PM

Thank you Nette; I need some prayers this week.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2014 6:48:00 PM

wow, I really enjoyed this set of little poems. With some tweeking, they could become haiku or sijo or something. GREAT job, dear. The last one my favorite.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/10/2014 7:21:00 PM

Thank you Andrea; I'm glad that you like them.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2014 6:47:00 PM

Hi, Lucilla, First I had to tell ya, yeah I made up the Sinatra ghost. Always wondered how far the guy was into the mafia though. Can you imagine a mafia ghost? hahaha. now to your poem.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/10/2014 7:20:00 PM

I always knew that he was deep into the Mafia. He was was always telling everybody - I'll put you in the trunk. May he rest in peace