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Juliet's Waiting

Romeo was waiting; I was still getting dressed. He softly whispered my name, and my face felt so red. He called my name again, and I think I fell to the floor. As I finished getting dressed, I raced to the door. When we met in the field, Oh how my heart raced! We kissed so warmly, and he held me gently. A while later, the dawn was rising. We had to go for our family was fighting. I sit here alone, smiling on the outside, Yet, dying within. My tears will fall until we meet again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/20/2009 10:42:00 AM
beautiful xo Raiin
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Date: 2/7/2009 8:10:00 AM
yea u should read my other poems i have a juliet waiting kind of and yea nice poem peace
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:11:00 PM
I'm jealous....It's not fair to be that young and write so well...You can't be 14. It's just not possible. lol You're amazing girl! Peace n Blessings! ~Oreo
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:07:00 AM
looove it great work!
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Date: 1/8/2009 8:21:00 AM
i sooo love that poem n ur rlly talented love u serenity
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Date: 12/16/2008 9:18:00 AM
I love Romeo&Juliet and your poem really tells how Juliet felt at that time. . . I am 16 years old. . And if you want you can text me at: 1-513-560-1320. . Love Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/16/2008 12:16:00 AM
I absoluty love Romeo & Juliet its just one of my favorit plays by william shakespeare =) we just got through reading it in english 1 and were watching. Anouther great play by him is Julius Caesar and Hamelt those are just some of my favs...lol Love:Joanie
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Date: 12/12/2008 9:05:00 AM
I can relate to this poem, being extremely happy about being in love but missing him so much because you are seperated I just wanted to say thanks for the comment and you probably already figured out its about the love of my life :)
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Date: 12/11/2008 9:14:00 AM
I like this poem!! We read Romeo and Juliet and it really made an impact on my life.. It inspired me to write this wonderful poem.
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