Jukebox Date

bump click bump bump click
bump click bump bump click

then she looked at me and smiled

"The first time I saw you,
oh you looked so fine.
And i had a feeling, 
one day you'd be mine.
Honey you came along,
and captured my heart."

and these were the words 
i wanted to say
that was the look 
i wanted on her face
and that was the feeling
i wanted for the rest of my life



( one of my last dates with April.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/18/2012 9:17:00 PM
Great write. Candid and sweet. Enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 1/18/2012 2:12:00 PM
Good advice to Colleen..Did she read it?..Thanks for stopping by..Whisperings is mostly how God speaks to me..Sara
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Date: 7/18/2012 4:37:00 PM
of all people!
Date: 1/12/2012 11:36:00 PM
A very good one for this Colleen, John. I have a few people VERY close to me who have tried doing themselves in recently. times are very hard. I don't really know how to help them. WE pray and we talk and nothing seems to help. it's a strange life!
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:56:00 AM
For your Colleen and all the other Colleen's out there that are in the same situation. I hope their friends can achieve their goal and bring them back to a place they want to be.
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:34:00 PM
Callinf for help!!! Everybody that knows Colleen contact her with your support. Now. ask Questions. Get Help. but most of all Pray. John
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