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Jukebox Date

bump click bump bump click bump click bump bump click then she looked at me and smiled "The first time I saw you, oh you looked so fine. And i had a feeling, one day you'd be mine. Honey you came along, and captured my heart." and these were the words i wanted to say that was the look i wanted on her face and that was the feeling i wanted for the rest of my life ( one of my last dates with April.)

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Doreen Wright

Date: 8/18/2012 9:17:00 PM

Great write. Candid and sweet. Enjoyed reading this.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2012 2:12:00 PM

Good advice to Colleen..Did she read it?..Thanks for stopping by..Whisperings is mostly how God speaks to me..Sara

John Loving Iii
Date: 7/18/2012 4:37:00 PM

of all people!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 11:36:00 PM

A very good one for this Colleen, John. I have a few people VERY close to me who have tried doing themselves in recently. times are very hard. I don't really know how to help them. WE pray and we talk and nothing seems to help. it's a strange life!

Joe Flach

Date: 1/12/2012 10:56:00 AM

For your Colleen and all the other Colleen's out there that are in the same situation. I hope their friends can achieve their goal and bring them back to a place they want to be.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/11/2012 5:34:00 PM

Callinf for help!!! Everybody that knows Colleen contact her with your support. Now. ask Questions. Get Help. but most of all Pray. John