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Juicy Fruit

bite juicy apple tastes of the unforbidden salt pours from my eyes. (January 21, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin) (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved,

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Date: 1/21/2011 5:03:00 PM
Also interesting. I wouldn' t have thought of the salt image!
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Date: 1/21/2011 2:02:00 PM
Besides a gum sold by the Wrigley Company of Chicago, did you know there's a Japanese pop group also known as the "Juicy Fruits"? Your senryu is nicely put together and delivers a coherent message.
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