Juicy

Enclosed box swiftly opened, allowing mouth to chew and pop! Ready now-- wiggle with juicy gum pack! 17 Dec 2015, Gabby Sabre Contest--Something with Great Impact 17 words used

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/23/2015 3:44:00 AM

Mouth-watering WIN! Congrats Gabby! ;-)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2015 4:31:00 PM

This is delightful and sweet, Gabby! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul

Faye Gibson

Date: 12/20/2015 11:30:00 AM

Congratulations, Gabby, this one is sweet.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:03:00 AM

Gabby, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/20/2015 6:21:00 AM

this is delightful and placed this as 6th on the roster, gabby... will check tech problems..warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest... huggs