Jueju and Qijue

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In the night sky, a full moon- it's beauty will be gone soon and hidden by drifting clouds creeping- grey stillness enshrouds. And I lay in bed waiting as moon baths me in bright light, I feel it soothing my soul until- behind grey it fades. _________________ November 12, 2016 Poetry/Jueju/Qijue Copyright Protected, ID 16-849-438-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for Contest # 237 sponsor, Brian Strand Fifth Place

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Francis J Grasso

Date: 11/17/2016 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful ... Congratulations Constance. ...Fran

James Inman

Date: 11/16/2016 8:16:00 AM

I like the tone of this one BW. Your last line describes me well.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/15/2016 1:43:00 PM

Lovely images, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/15/2016 9:20:00 AM

Beautiful, tranquil imagery about our majestic Moon, Constance, and I like the form too. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/15/2016 6:30:00 AM

A big congratulations on your splendid win, Constance:)

Mark Martin

Date: 11/15/2016 12:36:00 AM

Enjoyed this! Congrats! :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2016 9:55:00 PM

Lovely, Constance! Congrats!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/13/2016 3:05:00 PM

This morning is supposed to have a full moon called a perigee-syzygy. A really big super moon. So, interesting that your feelings and instincts had you write this. Interesting.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/13/2016 5:07:00 AM

Sheer beauty, Constance:) loved the new forms you tried out:)