Judgment Day

myself fearful ending starships gather humans justify my entry records alone

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2009 4:23:00 PM

Brilliant write, James! Like the way you put the "starships" into the Judgment Day scenario. Have you seen the movie "Knowing" yet? If you feel this way, you will love the film. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

Nola Perez

Date: 7/11/2009 9:28:00 AM

Love Laurie Ginn's remarks about her mother leaving the room. lol for lots of love, and laughs. I have spent a lot of time grieving the errors of my ways along the path. I hope it matters in the Face to Face we all face. My Ruminations in the Parking Lot poem is posted. It's around #12 from end of my entries. Nola

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2009 10:51:00 AM

I try with all my might to live the way the Lord wishes me to so that when my time comes I am not afraid James. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/9/2009 8:28:00 AM

What a scary day that will be for so many Jim, the thought just runs chills up and down my spine. Deep in thought here huh? very intriguing write....Charlene

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/9/2009 6:34:00 AM

I simply love this piece...the third line is a winner and justifying record?...so many of us will do that won't we..pleading our case so we can board the enterprise.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 7/9/2009 5:49:00 AM

I watched that movie "KNOWING" remains me alots of that, especially the "starships gather humans" part. Damn solar flares!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2009 5:34:00 AM

I like this one. If we think about it, we can become afraid. Thank God for Jesus' shed blood to cover me. Sara

Laurie Ginn

Date: 7/9/2009 3:28:00 AM

Once as a kid I was at a church camp. In the middle of the night everyone started gathering in someones room talking about judgement day. Everyone saying how painful it was going to be standing in front of God with all we'd done. Everyone was so overwhelmed at the thought until one girl spoke up and said, I know how bad it's going to be but I can face that as long as he makes my mother leave the room to which a gasp went up throughtout the room and everyone nodded in fear.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/9/2009 1:08:00 AM

chilly and scary-in a way,a good reflection of how we are preparing ourselves for judgement day--thanks for reminding me,i will search my soul deeper--bravo JIM--and thanks for the recipe--very good indeed,we share a passion for cooking Jim--THANKS AGAIN--;-)CHARMA