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Judas in Confess

Have gone through the great lengths of 
sacraments. Meeting Christ’s sunburnt skin
pinned on a cross roughly-hewn coupled with
Pre Hispanic syllabic script cushioned onto its north edge.
            (his body a graffiti of throes tie-dyed in blood-flecked sweat thereon)

On the highway, bound northeast towards Dusk Boulevard,
have recounted Mary’s chained beads-slash-companions
rolled between fingertips roundabout her wrists. (her virginity seeps thereunder)

I have psalms and odes 
to propel me 
all-throughout the free-flowing 
of mid-daydreams' split-endedness whose 
crazed reveries sprout from  
midnightlymares' common civility.

Christ. Mary. Psalms and odes. 
Yet my faith abandons its   strength.
(for good) I lay back  now,
                                   Let me  rest.

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  1. Date: 9/23/2008 3:21:00 AM
    GINO! congratulations! You are truly a deep and deserving poet! :) -nads-

  1. Date: 9/22/2008 10:02:00 PM
    Ey fellow, congratulations on your well deserved win (again)! Teri ~QC, Philippines

  1. Date: 9/22/2008 4:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Gino on your Honorable Mention on Charles Fuller's contest. Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 9/10/2008 4:42:00 AM
    wow! bro, amazing... I like whatever you write man, you have a great talent. Your skills are outstanding and very precious, keep rocking dude. I hope to see your new work soon :) All the best brother :) Love and Peace! :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2008 10:54:00 PM
    who's weirder?me or judas. your work is almost a master piece,you should consider writing a book.Never call a poet weird,its an insult in america. thanks buddy

  1. Date: 8/2/2008 8:47:00 PM
    INCREDIBLY POWERFUL both in images and message. The hairs on my arms are still standing at attention. Sensational writing GiNo. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/31/2008 11:08:00 PM
    SELF REFLECTIVE??? no way, its the beauty I see. dont be offended by my comments on your poem wasnt being smart kid.

  1. Date: 7/30/2008 2:09:00 AM
    I can imagine Judas' reflective moment. Your creative and spiritual words reached my soul. God Bless :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2008 8:12:00 AM
    wow what a brain racker I could picture this with pure clarity and the ending for judas thanks for sharing this great write enjoyed keep up the great writting blessings to you and family

  1. Date: 7/18/2008 9:13:00 AM
    Very discriptive, nice combinations of words. I like that your spiritual. Anne-Marie Christine

  1. Date: 7/15/2008 10:09:00 PM
    u judas?

  1. Date: 7/15/2008 8:08:00 PM
    sounds like judas got his faith...