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Jubilee of Roses

Neither puppy love nor lust, each insists in its imperfect play. Their hearts resist both by clinging in its barbaric way. Youth forgiven. The wolf begs her to stay. But a commitment is made in marriage. It is not found in a baby carriage. What do we know of love - it’s not first sight. It is the highs and lows - bond holds on tight. Love’s patient, kind, not selfish nor boastful. It’s the making of memories - joyful. To let go of bitterness’ a decision. Poof like magic, the wrongs are forgiven. Black and blues, the stumbles and falls, gets up on the horse - believers climb to the top. ~ Now what of those years, of the worse decrease? Does the sorrow make the better cerise? Does the white-gowned wife, handsome groom resume as if the bond is pruned, roses in bloom? Yes, the rivulets of tears reverent. The jubilee melody resonant. When love is stirred with sugar and nettles, sorrow’d years melt. Felicitous petals land on silver hair and wrinkles. O God! Yes, three cords complete and restore the flawed. Love protects, hopes, perseveres in trials. The truth of a lifetime's years in their smiles. Shakespeare regales Summer’s hot gaze, short days. Yet love stoked in the Winter’s hearth - O blaze! 1/30/2021 What Is Love Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Hybronnet is similar to a sonnet, can have a variable rhyme scheme, does not have to be iambic meter. The poet is given liberty to choose how to structure the rhyme of the Hybronnet poem into a combination of rhymes be it slant, feminine, masculine, etc. or apply it in any design deemed appropriate

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Date: 2/9/2021 3:24:00 PM
This one really speaks to me Kim. Great job! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 2/8/2021 9:22:00 AM
"Love protects, hopes, perseveres in trials." excellent writing, congratulation on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Marius!
Date: 2/8/2021 3:11:00 AM
So lovely Kim....Thoughts and words...Congrats on your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2021 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, Carol!
Date: 2/8/2021 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations Kim! Amazingly uplifting poem! Thanks for participating in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2021 3:49:00 AM
Thank you! So glad you liked it!
Date: 2/1/2021 9:39:00 AM
This is incredibly beautiful Kim. Love conquering the battles, healing the wounds, a beautiful victorious love story. Very well done and so encouraging! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thank you, B.J.!
Date: 1/31/2021 6:07:00 PM
This is nothing short of amazing, Kim. The content, the form, the style, the ebb and flow. A real paean to Love and Perseverance! Super! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2021 4:31:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/31/2021 1:20:00 PM
Interesting form. I need to check it out. Good one you have penned. Love is staying when you want to leave(that is in a normal relationship). Love is giving of yourself when you have given out. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2021 4:48:00 PM
You are right! Letting go of bitterness, forgiveness yields so much! God bless you, Sara! Thank you!
Date: 1/31/2021 4:11:00 AM
I've never tried this form but will now... this is beautiful! I hope you're a winner... such a inspiration and joy to read - it flows beautifully and blends to produce a wonderful work of art... a poetic wonder... God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2021 8:43:00 AM
Love ya, sweet lady! Thank you!
Date: 1/30/2021 11:00:00 PM
Perennial question. Your definition is spot on. Like comparing it to a rose, so lovely but full of thorns. Wonderful poem. ~ ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2021 3:27:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 1/30/2021 7:14:00 PM
Kim, 'When love is stirred with sugar and nettles, sorrow’d years melt.' This poem fascinates me. And I've read it and reread it a half a dozen times or more. Betrayal and the betrayed always swing a dull sword it seems. But not this; there is no sword. -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2021 3:28:00 AM
Thank you, Richard! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 1/30/2021 7:14:00 PM
BTW, a Fave... -R
Date: 1/30/2021 1:14:00 PM
This is really awesome, Kim. Enjoyed the shape and sound of love described in your wonderful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2021 2:21:00 PM
That means a lot coming from you, Vijay! You are so wonderful with imagery!
Date: 1/30/2021 10:57:00 AM
- Kim, love is always stirred with sugar and nettles ... true love overcomes everything ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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