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Joyous Melodies

Bright notes in the beat of your heart’s refrain Changed chords of my sad soul once strummed in pain Compose for me only sweet melodies Let’s dance, my love, an amorous reprise.
_____________________________________________ 2/13/2018 Written for Contest: Romance in 4 Lines Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/18/2018 3:18:00 PM
Lovely rhythmic beauty. Congrats for a most deserving win, Judy.
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Date: 2/16/2018 12:35:00 AM
So artistic a beautiful poem Judy. Congratulations on your placement....Maria xx
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Date: 2/15/2018 6:34:00 PM
So beautiful, Judith. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 2/15/2018 5:51:00 PM
This is so good, Judith, and I like that you used musical metaphors for your romantic imagery! Congrats :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 3:54:00 PM
Elegant musical metaphors this lovely poem be, Judith. Very romantic write. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Date: 2/14/2018 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations Judith. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/14/2018 12:13:00 PM
- Lovely dance of love, Judy :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2018 9:05:00 AM
Sweet music for two beloveds.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:35:00 AM
So sweet and melodious, Judy, a winning entry for the contest, I'm sure xxoo happy Valentine's day!
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Date: 2/13/2018 9:34:00 PM
Oh my dear friend Judy, this poem is absolutely gorgeous! Every romantic line is filled with lovely wooing lines. A great write that's so beautifully heartfelt. Best wishes for win!! Your NE friend. ~Susan
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Date: 2/13/2018 7:35:00 PM
Dancing hearts , beautiful Judy, loved this one :) good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/13/2018 2:43:00 PM
You wrote this like a true musician...I love the style...the air of it...All the best Judith
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, dear Arturo, for your always supportive comments! ~Judy
Date: 2/13/2018 12:25:00 PM
Lovely, sweet poem, Judy..best for a win.
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Date: 2/13/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, as always, for your kind comments Vijay!! ~ Judy

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