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Joyful Autumn Dance

Joyful in its dance, a leaf calls out to others... Join the Autumn winds Placement: 8th

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

Lovely! This actually made me smile to read this. Congratulations on your eighth place win!

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 2:12:00 PM

Congrtulations Paula on your 8th place. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:36:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 10:57:00 AM

I love the way you made the one leaf so unique, calling out to its friends! congratulations. Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:05:00 PM

A joyous haiku Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 8:56:00 PM

Very imaginative haiku. Many congratulations on this win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Paula! I can see this so clearly. Beautiful...Love, Audrey P

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations on the 8th place win for your nice write, Paula

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:40:00 PM

Beautiful personification here, dear Paula. Congrats on your win. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:37:00 PM

Congrats, Paula. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:06:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest.. a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight with luv my friend..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 5:00:00 PM

Wonderful...congrats on your win..Joyful in its dance..thats very nice. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2010 9:45:00 AM

OH, is this for the DAnce contest? If so, what a lovely idea!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/2/2010 11:59:00 PM

Great beauty in these lines. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ...Paula S

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/1/2010 7:50:00 AM

lovely, I think the "dancing leaves" are my favourite time of year

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 12:14:00 AM

love this ... Thank you for your kind remarks on my win xxsarah xx

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2010 7:22:00 PM

Love & enjoyed reading your haiku*~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2010 11:49:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Paula. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/31/2010 5:32:00 AM

well written haiku!

Liz Walsh

Date: 8/31/2010 3:24:00 AM

Lovely, Liz-

Joe Flach

Date: 8/30/2010 10:10:00 PM

Terrific Haiku. Paula. Way to go Paula! (Sorry, couldn't help it - a line from "An Officer and a Gentleman" just somehow slipped out.) Joe