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"She is only a heart stop away" She came to us so tiny, We could hold her in one hand, But there wasn't a more loved baby In the whole of this spacious land. She lived life to the fullest, And brought joy to us each day. The love and delight and awe she wrought, Is in our hearts to stay. Her face was the face of an angel, Her spirit that of an elf. She asked for no one's pity And had none for herself. She was wrapped in a luxury of love, That cushioned every fall. It's not the moments of sadness. But the happiness we recall. Just like the light from that long ago star, Still shining in the sky, She left a glow that will brighten our way, Until the day we die. It is not how long the race, they say But how the race is run And though she had less than a dozen years, She made the best of every one. Won 2nd place By Joyce Johnson 8/28/11 For my namesake granddaughter and For Constance's contest "A Poem, Please"

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Date: 7/24/2016 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations...I loved the poem and the sentiment..Larry
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:15:00 PM
Hi Joyce, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a wonderful write Joyce, it does touch the heart. An excellent write. A definite seven.
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce..Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:44:00 AM
A Second Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:51:00 AM
Joyce this is marvellous dear. many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:03:00 PM
Wonderful poem!!!!!!!congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!---Lori
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your second place with this lovely piece of poetry that touches the heart and soul my friend...luv..
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:53:00 PM
Wow Joyce, what a beautiful tribute to your granddaughter she must be smiling down on you.. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:38:00 PM
so sweeet, joyce..congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your 2nd place win this wonderful write. Your grand-daughter had a truly wonderful grandma. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Beautiful tribute. Excellent write. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:59:00 AM
hey Joyce congrats on a great win.. David
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Constance's "A Poem Please" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:22:00 PM
constance will love this, I am sure. Such a sweet tribute for that young granddaughter you remember so beautifully here.
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:14:00 PM
a beautiful and special write Joyce ..fond memories of a wonderful child who added so much to life.. good luck in the contest with this superb creation my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:06:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I can invision your delight in the child and the pain of early loss..I also see the hope that you have in Christ through these lines..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the congrats and letting me know that I placed in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:38:00 AM
If the lengh of a life determined sucess, the world would make no sense. Still, the loss of a child is the most difficult for me. Tony
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Date: 8/29/2011 12:48:00 AM
Just beautiful. I am so sorry for the loss of your granddaughter but I hope you give this poem to your granddaughter's mom (your daughter or daughter in law). It is a wonderful honour for them. Love Lee
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