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Joy In the Morning

morning dew scatters, as hummingbirds fan their wings.... a breath of fresh air friendly rivalry between humming birds and bees... flowers beg notice

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/1/2012 10:43:00 AM

This is so lovely Carrie :D I especially enjoyed your first haiku here :D and that photo is cute! Thank you so much for passing by my poem :D I hope all is well with you and hugs to you, sweet Carrie :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2012 10:55:00 PM

Oh, I love how you included the bees into the picture at the end there. CUTE.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/22/2012 9:14:00 AM

beautiful haiku, carrie. i chuckled at your action man comments, lol

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/22/2012 7:49:00 AM

Joy is the perfect word for these wonderful Haikus' good luck Carrie. harry

David Williams

Date: 4/21/2012 1:10:00 PM

Carrie a great entree for the contest. good luck and have a great weekend..David

Kash Poet

Date: 4/21/2012 9:55:00 AM

Nice imagery here by you Carrie.Best wishes in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2012 7:10:00 AM

This was a breath of fresh air Carrie, thank you. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2012 7:11:00 AM

Wish you good luck in contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2012 9:33:00 PM

very pretty. I particularly like the image of the first one.

Nancy Jones

Date: 4/20/2012 8:34:00 PM

The first stanza got me.