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Joy and Pain

such joy
the oneness
two hearts as one
wonderful feeling of being complete

shed tears at the bitter separation
dazed confusion

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  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:24:00 PM
    I really like how you did this one, the contrast of it. I could have sworn I had seen it before too, but I see no comment of mine here. thanks for my HM in your contest. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:10:00 PM
    A sad statement on the fate of many couples, Jack. Excellent use of the tetractys form as well. Best wishes in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 6:02:00 PM
    the highs and lows of luv my friend.. an awesome use of the form Jack..good luck in this cool

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 1:55:00 PM
    Niced expressions of love's completeness and pain at the separation, I think pain and love go together, jack

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 12:22:00 PM
    a wonderful piece of beautiful poetry. thank you for commenting on mr robin pays a visit.

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 12:09:00 PM
    What a brilliant write from you Jack...enjoyed.Best wishes.