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Journey To the Sun

...for the Rev Shirvell-Price, with respect and affection Morning. The child awakes, steps light across his garden. Windows of the dwelling o'er the glen ablaze with sparkling brilliance draw his gaze, and peak his curiosity. Suited for all-comers, with sturdy leggings for his Big Adventure, he takes on the day, as brave as good King Arthur on a mission for the Grail. Striding forth, his heart is beating like a drum as he tarries by the river to bathe his feet in icy water, wolfing down the victuals made ready by his mum. Trudging up the hillside, harder than the journey down, wearying now his steps are measured. He needs to claim his dream though his eyes now see dull sockets where the shining should have been. Depressed, he sits exhausted to weigh the reason why. As he turns, hungry for home, his heart is leaping, for basking in the radiance of the slowly dying sunset is his own bright shining home, its windows glittering like burnished gold!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/30/2012 8:07:00 AM
You broaden my horizons - I looked up the Rev Shirvell-Price, Anna Akhmatova. Such a marvelous piece. Love, Kathy
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:14:00 PM
this is it, the one I think is one of your very best!!!
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:44:00 AM
great write Keith,learning from your beautiful styles
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:14:00 PM
thou in beauty pens a wonderous peom to behold..... ;) I feel like writing in old english now!
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:24:00 PM
WOW, this is awesome. I just love the twist ending on it. he got something after all from that day!! This reminded me of when I grew up in WA state and how I longed for sunshine but always got rain!
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:20:00 PM
Keith your words speak directly to my heart...for I walk this journey each day. Peace and many blessings my friend.
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