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Journey Through Life

In your jouney through life down the path of your goals, there's a place that you surely must get, and although you're not sure where that place is you seek, with a roll of the dice you will bet, for the name of the game is uncertain, like the people that somehow you met, and although you may think your in charge, time will catch you up in it's net, as long as those dice are a winning, they will call you an excellent guy, yet loose a few hands in this life, and see how many stick by, yet what does it matter a win or a loss, it's all the same in the end, for you know your ok if the man on that day, will call you a genuine friend.....

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Date: 6/21/2013 4:13:00 PM
nicely done Bryan ,,,,, glad you liked my MASSACRE" . welcome to poetry soup;}
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Bryan Dueck
Date: 6/26/2013 1:53:00 PM
Thank's Debbie
Date: 6/2/2013 10:25:00 AM
Great job! I like this work a lot, very good tempo and excellent message. I think the line with as long as those dice are a winning, the a could probably be dropped, it really doesn't help the line which is great without it. Good write!
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Date: 5/31/2013 6:11:00 PM
Hello Bryan, a nice way to express a warm journey through life. I like the nature of a rough path, and being acknowledged as a good person at the end...... always~ LINDA
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