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Journey: Tanka Sequence

remembered lines of poetry from youth just pretty poems the adjectives and adverbs hypnotizing my heart the poetic spell almost consuming my life from houseman to frost and back to shakespeare and dying inside for truth so simple and silent devoid of actual words so memorable useless dreams of prized stuff carried away by wind and stars Soon I was looking at real stars and mountain crests without prettys rosy fins looking really looking without judgement try to be

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Date: 10/2/2015 5:25:00 PM
lovely thoughts, Thomas. It's good to see you are posting. I looked you up to see if you were still around!!
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:21:00 PM
mellow!... any plans of publishing a book on tankas?... fine, fine job, thomas.. huggs
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