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Journey Onwards

Tiny bits of beauty I seem to florish Showered acts of piety I am mold and polished Experience I have enough Gosh! How it teach me allot Even life is that so tough Still it didn't stop me to laugh Here in this arid land I learned things beyond Things I was once never do Here to keep up, I need too Indeed it's been a great journey.. There are so many worries So much so are the stories Then again it is a part of my life history I'm looking forward Determined always to move onward With one foot step affront I am more prepared for a staunt.. By: olive_eloi 6:54pm 12/04/2013 /------------»»»

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Date: 11/19/2014 3:46:00 PM
Journey onwards sometimes has to be undertaken, to frequently look back and ponder, walk yonder. There's a seam of wisdom here, James :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:05:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, with optimism Olive !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 3:38:00 AM
Thanks so much anne lise.. :) i really appreciate your comment. :)

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