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Journey of Love

Time is resolutely in motion In no captivity or subjugation Let not the caravan of life halt Love is a journey not a destination Winner in Contest "Four, For, Fore" Light & Love of Debbie Guzzi judged on 11/22/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 12:00:00 PM

Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Mohammad. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 6:01:00 PM

Mohammad, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/25/2012 5:09:00 PM

Thanks PD for your heart warming comments.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/23/2012 3:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Mohammad xx

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/23/2012 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Mandy for your message of congratulations on on my Quatrains win in the contest

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2012 7:42:00 PM

THanks so much for stopping by my writes, I would like to have your verse in my little contest for 4 line poems, if you would do me the honor the contest is called [Four, Fore, For..] Light & Love

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/23/2012 6:11:00 PM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 3:03:00 PM

Very nice. I love the caravan of life line!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/22/2012 5:48:00 PM

Thanks for your admiration Andrea. You are so kind

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/18/2012 8:43:00 PM

A poetic wonder! Love it! Cynthia

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/20/2012 11:11:00 AM

Thanks for your uplifting comments, Cynthia.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2012 11:43:00 AM

"Love is a journey not a destination" Beautiful words to the end.....Thank you !!! Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/18/2012 1:06:00 PM

Thanks Anne for your very kind comments. The beauty of Quatrains (in Persian called RUBAI'YAT) is they are quotable.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/15/2012 7:55:00 AM

That last line is a great truth preced by insight that there is nothing that affects time; it marches ondespite what is happening. Great thought with so few words and beautifully said! :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/15/2012 4:59:00 PM

Thanks for your brilliant comment, Elizabeth. As always you are liberal with your praise. -Mohammad

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/14/2012 9:46:00 AM

If only one would take some of that time, Mohammad, to grasp the very love, that would let us all live in a peaceful aspect... i like your poem, it is so positive...

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/14/2012 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Harry for your enlightened comments on my poem. The fact is that you have revealed the soul of the poem. In writing Quatrains I am inspired by the Urdu Language poet Josh Malihabadi whose 700 Rubai'yat contained in two books I have translated into English Quatrain. One of my books was published in USA and the second one's manuscript is being edited and will go to the press shortly. Regards