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Captured beneath a smokey red hazy sky, mesmerized My attention and heart did follow Sky aglow for as far as the eye could see A beautiful sunset resting in her hallow Red, pinks, some bedazzled grays Imprisoned rainbows from this day Quiet as they did sweep, silent Across the land into the deep Breathless, I gazed upon such beauty magnificent She gently kissed the earth goodnight With my hand to my heart I was lost without word, simply grateful for such a sight Too quickly she hurried Whispering sweet promises of her next journey Written by : Corrina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2015 7:27:00 AM
Corrina, lovely, captivating, magical, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, A perfec. . .
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/13/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings, I appreciate your time and comments as well , Many blessings Corrina
Date: 5/12/2015 2:39:00 PM
Corrina, you have so much to offer when it come to poetry. Thanks for sharing a journey in which is much more than path or just a part of life. We should enjoy every step we take, big small, happy, or sad.. For life is deep. Nature, how could we not enjoy.... SKAT
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 10:10:00 PM
Thank you for your kind generous words SKAT, it means a lot to hear words from an established writer as yourself, hugz
Date: 5/12/2015 1:52:00 PM
Your poem is nice.ost without 'lost without word' is beautiful. Keep up the lovely imagedry.
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 10:11:00 PM
Erin thank you for you words , images run rampant into minds eye , thank you for noticing. ! Best , corrina

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