Journey

Staring into space. Mind wondering. Dreams coming and going. Attention nowhere to be found. Reality fading. Dreams become vivid. Mind focusing. Wait something. Fuzzy. Dark. Big. Spikes. RUN! Out of breath. Panting. Heaving. Thirsty. Look behind. Still there. Coming. Chasing. Run again. Getting closer. Hiding. Lost. Cold. Alone. Cry. Found. SCREAM! Pain. Wake up. Sweating. Dreaming. Relief. By: Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 03/04/2009

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/27/2009 8:50:00 AM

And then you feel the physical tiredness that say the dream was more than virtual ... we are just too mortal to past through the cosmic door ... bravo on a brilliant write.

James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2009 8:54:00 AM

Used to suffer from them when i was younger, but time eased them, James

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/22/2009 2:37:00 AM

Reads well, nightmares are crazy, Ruben says it all...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/18/2009 1:00:00 PM

Sounds like one of my nightmares. Blah. They are so awful. But always so great to wake up from. Great capture. Love, Shar