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Journey

“Floating on prayer hymn the journey isn’t construed amiss, it takes life through the stillness of soul to the bay of bliss.” – Quote by Poet The unique landscape of life mesmerizing, shrouded by the serene seclusion screen, spreads the sensation of surreal stillness, swathes me as I wander on my lonely journey. The rippling breeze of spring beguiling, captivates me with its charming cadence. My essence roaming in the tranquility terrain, gets suffused with the aura of rhapsody. I walk on the fawn forest path meandering through the shadow of the ancient trees, shedding the wilted golden foliage of the fall at the end of their verdant time. My footsteps crumple the pile of leaves rustling, making the morose music of aloneness for my timeless journey within, I am yet to finish. At the sunset time trickling away unrelenting, I saunter at the periphery of my livid landscape toward the hazy horizon of obscurity, to reach the eternal sanctum of serenity. Flushed by the final flash of twilight tinge enthralling, I am walking the last mile on the remnant time-track to be traveled, for the desolate journey in the domain of destiny. ________________ March 5, 2023 Word Chosen : Journey Contest : Writing Challenge - "J" Words Sponsored by : Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:59:00 PM
Subimal, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:20:00 PM
One of your best writes, Subimal! A fav ~ congratulations on your win
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/9/2023 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, US for your compliment, and for "faving" the poem.
Date: 3/9/2023 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful and I love the scattering of alliteration throughout. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/9/2023 10:08:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations ... well deserved, Subimal :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/9/2023 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, SS once again.
Date: 3/5/2023 3:34:00 AM
- "Flushed by the final flash of twilight tinge enthralling, I am walking the last mile" ... lovely, Subimal :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/9/2023 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, SS.

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