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Joseph Sleeps

heart's at peace no longer fears for Mary bearing God’s Son – Joseph sleeps ~*~ * * * * * * * * * * * Note: #13 of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas! * * * * * * * * * * *

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 7:00:00 AM

this one is so nice, Audrey!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/19/2010 10:14:00 AM

Another gem in the series Audrey.. I am looking forward to your monoku ;) love Wilma

Noel Villarosa

Date: 12/18/2010 9:01:00 PM

Joseph was a father and a great provider. Your words reflect the holy family's triumph. Very timely to read this, Audrey. (^_^) Noel.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/18/2010 4:48:00 PM

Nice thought explicitly explained with good images

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/18/2010 12:58:00 PM

Joseph sleeps because he is at peace with God.What better peace to be. Audrey well done. This is in section with the season....God Bless and Merry Christmas .... Taz

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/18/2010 11:54:00 AM

Dear Audrey, You Have intrigued me with this Form I'm very fond of Haiku and Senryu : You have peaked my Interest I like all of have read so far See YOU soon LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG ~ SOUP MAIL REPLY

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/18/2010 10:30:00 AM

Yes, I agree with Lay, this is my favorite so far as well, Dimples. I love the peaceful image of Joseph sleeping without fear in the manger! Thanks so much for sharing these with us. Love, Carolyn

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/18/2010 10:05:00 AM

Hi Audrey. Thanks for the visit. Very descriptive with so few words. I like the idea that only Mary, God’s Son and Joseph have capitols, giving a punch to the piece. Really busy at the moment so will catch up with the rest later. Eamon

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/18/2010 9:40:00 AM

My favorite so far Audrey! Happy Holidays honey...Lay