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Oh lets join our dreams together, walk the path of forever. Let's kiss in starry skies, make love in the moonbeams glow, caress with loving eyes. Let's dip our toes in the waters of desire, meld, bond, explode in the ecstasy of our union. A union in rhyme with two beating hearts, borne on a tide of lasting emotions. Let the moon be the jewel in our crown and the stars the diamonds that surround, let the night be the blanket that covers our love. Let lips meet and pores touch in the spirit of passion, and create bliss both sublime and to be treasured.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2010 7:28:00 AM
Ahhh, only to dream, how awesome..... Jeralynn A favorite
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Date: 3/12/2010 5:45:00 AM
Are you this "romantic" in life, Daniel? Who could resist a man with such a gift for creating beauty through words? But you already know I'm a fan. Wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:35:00 PM
A most romantic and passionate write Daniel and a new favorite of mine tonight.. warmth and emotion exudes from your words so brilliantly...luv.. "Sweetheart" ..thankxxx for your many special comments and uplifting remarks on my poetry.. always...
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:32:00 AM
Daniel,what a beauty to come and read such dreams..i love these kind of dreams,they make each reader dream-excellent wrk-Charma.
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Date: 3/11/2010 12:54:00 AM
Nice one Daniel & thank you for your kind words today Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/10/2010 2:17:00 PM
WOW My mouth's watering!!! lol Such beautiful words... Why can't I think of things like this to write??? lol Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/10/2010 12:45:00 PM
Whew....fan, fan, fan...steamy and sultry, I love it! Nice Daniel! Jeralynn
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Date: 3/10/2010 11:06:00 AM
Very passionate write in this one, Daniel. I like the first line especially...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:16:00 AM
Good poem to join in a contest. I enjoyed reading ..TATA
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