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john's slushy rant

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john's slushy rant

new mothers

                          youngish women,
             under thirty years old 

okay,   walkin down the sidewalk 
                                           with a stroller and a baby –

                    and also wearing very hot clothing.
                                                                      like hot.

			like hey-I’m-looking-super-attractive hot.

why. 		why?

 	- huh

she already bagged a mate!

like unless she’s lookin
		      for -
	                      a new mate –

like if she’s a mom
	     with a stable husband
		                 on the sidewalk -

		        and a baby -

why you lookin all hot like that!

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  1. Date: 8/8/2009 6:28:00 AM
    I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Andrew. She wants to still be attractive to her mate. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol