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John's Slushy Rant

new mothers young youngish women, under thirty years old okay, walkin down the sidewalk with a stroller and a baby – oh, and also wearing very hot clothing. like hot. like hey-I’m-looking-super-attractive hot. why. why? why!? - huh she already bagged a mate! like unless she’s lookin for - a new mate – like if she’s a mom with a stable husband on the sidewalk - and a baby - why you lookin all hot like that!

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Date: 8/8/2009 6:28:00 AM
I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morning Andrew. She wants to still be attractive to her mate. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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